The Gloob Of Thannook - Tidy Version

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The Gloob Of Thannook - Tidy Version

Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:50 pm

THE GLOOB OF THANNOOK

Eight lines to a verse,
Eight verse, to a chapter.
Eight chapters a book,
Filled with sorrow and laughter.
Eight lessons for children,
The audience I'm reaching,
Without sounding glib,
From the pulpit, not preaching.
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:51 pm

:P
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:51 pm

:P
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:52 pm

:P
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:52 pm

:P
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:52 pm

:P
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Postby poohcarrot » Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:53 pm

:P
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Postby Batty » Sun Sep 20, 2009 6:56 pm

You missed the' P.S. Poggy was bridesmaid' ! :lol:
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Postby kakaze » Fri Sep 25, 2009 4:23 pm

is each verse on a separate page? or is the whole chapter all together?
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Postby poohcarrot » Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:29 am

I reckon 4 pages to a chapter. Page 1 picture of the whole chapter, page 2 glossary of terms, pages 3 & 4 the chapter. But Chapter 8 has no picture, just black.
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Postby Lady Vetinari » Mon Oct 26, 2009 11:31 pm

Already said this - but

I would buy this with or without any charity donation attached ... it's nice that the Gloob finds someone to love and care for him - who is just as kooky!
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Postby Ponder Stibbons » Sat Apr 24, 2010 6:13 am

Brilliant!(I mean pants! :lol: )
Now i see what you mean about the discworld convention. :D
I dont know how you managed to come up with the rhymes, but its really good.(except for the bad TP rhyme :lol: )
Seems towards the second and third he isnt quite so down to earth and no electronic-ey as before.
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