The Gloob Of Thannook 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 4, 8 & SEVEN

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Postby poohbcarrot » Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:42 pm

I had to include these two new characters for the tear jerking chapter 8 when, a la JK Rowling, there is a death.
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Postby Tonyblack » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:28 pm

Noooooo!!!!! :shock: :o
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Postby poohbcarrot » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:32 pm

I said in the first post on this thread there would be a tear-jerker of a last chapter :cry:
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Postby Jan Van Quirm » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:49 pm

Fears for the doggies :shock:
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Postby Tina a.k.a.SusanSto.Helit » Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:32 pm

Batty wrote:"They giggled like schoolboys
And drank snotty champagne."

Um... Does their wine merchant frequent any libraries? ... Image


Just Keep Dotsie away from them... :lol:
Aha! So, Bob's yer uncle... very clever.
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Postby poohbcarrot » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:01 pm

:P
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Postby Tonyblack » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:11 pm

Wonderful! :D

I'm really enjoying this. It's simple to read, exciting and funny.
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Postby Jan Van Quirm » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:19 pm

What sort of father are you! :wink: :lol:

Two typos early on

Today was the day.
The waiting had eneded.
For Scruch's big date


and in red for you this time Tony :wink:
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Postby poohbcarrot » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:24 pm

I'm a bda fater!

Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me. :lol:
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Postby chris.ph » Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:58 pm

very good pooh you should get cheery to illustrate it and then publish :D
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Postby Batty » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:14 pm

Image I'm enjoying these stories, pooh.

Don't you think that Ted should have been eating a Hot Dog though?
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Postby Jan Van Quirm » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:38 pm

poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!

Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me. :lol:

Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way :wink:

And Chris is right - Cheery'd do a great job with this :D
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Postby Tina a.k.a.SusanSto.Helit » Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:52 pm

Jan Van Quirm wrote:
poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!

Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me. :lol:

Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way :wink:

And Chris is right - Cheery'd do a great job with this :D


I Agree with Jan! You and Cheery would Rock with this!!
Aha! So, Bob's yer uncle... very clever.
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Postby chris.ph » Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:08 pm

Jan Van Quirm wrote:
poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!

Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me. :lol:

Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way :wink:

jans easily pleased then :lol:
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Postby Jan Van Quirm » Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:55 pm

:lol: Well you know how it is Chris I rarely get out of my own brainpan so it doesn't take much to keep me entertained :twisted:
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