The Gloob Of Thannook 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 4, 8 & SEVEN
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by poohbcarrot » Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:42 pm
I had to include these two new characters for the tear jerking chapter 8 when, a la JK Rowling, there is a death.
"It's better to belong where you don't belong than not to belong where you used to belong,
remembering when you used to belong there" -Sneebs
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by poohbcarrot » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:32 pm
I said in the first post on this thread there would be a tear-jerker of a last chapter 
"It's better to belong where you don't belong than not to belong where you used to belong,
remembering when you used to belong there" -Sneebs
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by Jan Van Quirm » Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:49 pm
Fears for the doggies 
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by Tina a.k.a.SusanSto.Helit » Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:32 pm
Batty wrote:"They giggled like schoolboys
And drank snotty champagne."
Um... Does their wine merchant frequent any libraries? ...
Just Keep Dotsie away from them...
Aha! So, Bob's yer uncle... very clever.
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by poohbcarrot » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:01 pm
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by Tonyblack » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:11 pm
Wonderful! 
I'm really enjoying this. It's simple to read, exciting and funny.
I'm really enjoying this. It's simple to read, exciting and funny.
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by Jan Van Quirm » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:19 pm
What sort of father are you! 
Two typos early on
Today was the day.
The waiting had eneded.
For Scruch's big date
and in red for you this time Tony
Two typos early on
Today was the day.
The waiting had eneded.
For Scruch's big date
and in red for you this time Tony
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by poohbcarrot » Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:24 pm
I'm a bda fater!
Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me.
Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me.
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remembering when you used to belong there" -Sneebs
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by Batty » Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:14 pm
I'm enjoying these stories, pooh.
Don't you think that Ted should have been eating a Hot Dog though?
Going to my school was an education in itself. Which is not to be confused with actually getting an education (Schultz)
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by Jan Van Quirm » Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:38 pm
poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!
Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me.
Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way
And Chris is right - Cheery'd do a great job with this
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by Tina a.k.a.SusanSto.Helit » Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:52 pm
Jan Van Quirm wrote:poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!
Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me.
Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way
And Chris is right - Cheery'd do a great job with this
I Agree with Jan! You and Cheery would Rock with this!!
Aha! So, Bob's yer uncle... very clever.
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by chris.ph » Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:08 pm
Jan Van Quirm wrote:poohbcarrot wrote:I'm a bda fater!
Come on Jan, you love it when you correct me.
Love it? It fulfils me in every possible way
jans easily pleased then
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by Jan Van Quirm » Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:55 pm
Well you know how it is Chris I rarely get out of my own brainpan so it doesn't take much to keep me entertained 
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