Redline proofing services -
It is the year 3012AJ
~ presumably 3000+ years after the date of publication of the the Book of John?
In current reckoning this would of course add three
thousand years to 2012CE so the year would then be 5012? Would humans still be living a life relatively akin to current reality after 3000 years when they weren't warring the whole time? Discuss...
Since mankind had learned to control the weather, everyday was perfect.
~ every day
The last time they had indulged in sex had been nearly a month ago, and the last meal she had served him had been cold beens on burnt toast.
You shouldn't hang out with those loses. They're bad news."
~ losers or louses (but the pleasuretron's already done the lice gag
winked her bionic eye mischieviously.
~ mispronunciation: the last 'i' is superflous = mischievously
It is imperitive that she doesn't make it to Tescos
Around 2050 words so far
A journey starts with but a single step etc etc.
Regarding the potential anomaly in your 'knowing' about the RL killing - keep the shooting incident in there as 'history' - that means you can know about the attempt etc and will
get your trip to NYC 1980 after all. I'd suggest that you make very
sure to get Dot-C something special before you go back to the future though - however many times you have to go back...
Title of The Book ~ Hmm - ish... All you need is Love* has to be the
most trite and irritating tune ever
Would 'Imagine' not come into it somewhere or is that too predictable?
*Also it was credited to Lennon/McCartney even though John wrote it - I think his ego would have wanted the title to be something that wholly 'belonged' to him