Weekelda wrote:"This is a very short (piece of) writing by me. Critise it, comment on it or, if you like, cotinue it. Ok, here goes...
The seer gzed into the fire and started to speak, paying no attention to the gathering crowd. " there will be born a child who, in adulthood will be a great warrior. He will turn the tide of war but will die on the battlefield, for such is the fate of the chosen one. His name will be..." The seer faltered."
Did I point out your spellimg mastakes? No.
Did I correct grammar your? No
Did you ask for people to "critise" you? Yes
Did I point out that you said one thing (paying no attention to the crowd) then said the complete opposite (faltered)? Yes
I'm being victimised!